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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-09-19 05:46 PM


the sickness evolved into....
something more.
a sadness so deep,
it's completely
UNEXPLAINABLE.
it slowly crept upon me,
like a maddening
DISEASE.
life had no more meanings,
love no longer
EXISTED.
will this ever end?
or will it lead into
INSANITY?
i'm not sure of these answers,
but i wish i could find them soon
QUESTIONS.

Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
peachesNcream
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Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2001-09-19 07:21 PM


Hey! You know I love ya mon! This was a good poem although I really hope you don't go insane! You know I'm here if you ever need someone to talk to! lylas ~Jess

~*~Life is only worth living once if you've found someone worth dying for~*~
~*~How can we be friends if everytime I look at you I know thats all we'

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2 posted 2001-09-19 07:46 PM


I loved this poem .. but i hope your ok and like Jess said hope you dont go insane.. but im here if you want to talk to

                    !~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*
*If you ever need anyone to talk to feel free to l

fearing-laughter
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3 posted 2001-09-20 12:25 PM


hey hey,
good poem...fulla strong emotions.  depression is pretty annoying, eh?  oh well...at least if you go insane you can still write poetry?? just a thought...j/k.  i hope you feel better.  smile?
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4 posted 2001-09-20 11:06 AM


Insanity is a good way to describe depression in my feeling cuz i often do feel as though i am going insane while i am in the midst of struggling with it...very real poem..if you ever need to talk please e-mail me...::hugs::
anonymousfemale
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Limbo
5 posted 2001-09-21 11:53 AM


Interesting poem. It goes lightly into thoughts a lot of people think about without being overbearing.

Well done. I hope things begin to look up for you soon. If not, you can always email me and yab for a bit.  

~AF~

"Hi there, can I relay a sonnet your way?"
"Go away"
"Come on"
*dials the police*
"Alright!..."

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6 posted 2001-09-21 04:12 PM


Good luck in finding the answers to your questions. I thought this poem was nice. Powerful.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...
7 posted 2001-09-23 02:04 PM


thanks 4 the replies, i appreciate them alot.
sometimes i wonder about my mental health my family, and my friends drive me plum-loco sometimes...but o well...
luv much,

Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....

Punk Angel
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since 2001-07-25
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8 posted 2001-10-03 10:31 AM


AAHHHH staci!!! lol u better not mean that I drive u insane!! lol jp hey this is a really good poem ok well im gonna go read ur others now if i can cuz im in shool lol

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??    
~*Krista*~

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