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I Loved You...I Lost You....and Now I Love You More...
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I Loved You...I Lost You....and Now I Love You More... |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
This is for anyone who has ever lost someone they really love (poem was inspired by a friend) -------------------------- I loved you. More than the birds love the air. More than the fish love the sea. More than the plants love the earth. And more than humans loved a good hearth. I lost you. Pain was more than a burn, than a scratch, than a tear, than a broken bone, or a true fear. Now I love you more. More than the birds love the air. More than the fish love the sea. And more than the plants love the earth. ~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ ~*~I say it is the written word.~*~ [This message has been edited by FoxXena (edited 09-18-2001).] |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
awww this was so sweet  i sooo know how you feel! "Its a great day tobe alive, I know the suns still shinin when I close my eyes!" |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Wow! This is so amazing. I'm sorry for your loss. Sometimes it takes an eternity for the pain to heal. But time will tell. I hope you get better with time. And I'm always an ear willing to listen. If we're told we're bad, that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe if we are surrounded by beauty someday we will become what we see. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, i luved this so much......thanks 4 the read....  Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?..... |
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a.k.a.maLa Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 15Florida, USA |
very nice |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is so beautiful in a really sad way. It's hard coming to such a realisation when you lose someone but perhaps these are the challenges that make us more human?  Take care and thanks for sharing. ~AF~ Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, merry, merry king of the bush is he. Laugh! kookaburra LAGUH! Kookaburra how gay your life must be. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a sweet and sad poem all put together in one...good job!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That is really sweet. Thanks for the enjoyed read. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
i really like that poem....it has meaning behind it!! |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work, this is a beautiful poem in a sad way thank you for sharing your work Zu "Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT" |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh, so good! So true... Right on! If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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