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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-09-17 04:43 PM

Whenever I think about you,
my heart starts to race,
and I get all jumpy inside.
I think that's kind of funny,
because you don't even know me,
but maybe someday you will.
When I saw you for the first time,
my heart just crumbled,
just because of the way you were.
You're not the most handsome,
that's not why you caught my eye,
it was just the way you're always smiling.
You're not the smoothest one,
that's what caught my eye,
you just make life up as you go.
When I heard your voice for the first time,
It was sweeter than sugar,
and it melted me instantly.
It's not a "manly" voice,
an intimidating, hollow nothing,
it's a sweet whisper amongst a crowd.
It's just the sweetest thing,
that my ears have heard and
I wanted you to know.
For the first time in a long time,
someone I don't even know has melted me,
and I seem to like the feeling.
I think it's funny,
because I don't even know you,
I don't even know your name.

this isn't about Justin!

Sugarpie313 married my poem! (that's my poem, not your poem! pooh!)

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2001-09-17 06:05 PM

Great piece Allysa. I felt as though I knew where you were going with this poem. I could relate to it. Well keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

FoxXena
Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

2 posted 2001-09-17 06:31 PM

I know the feeling.

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

3 posted 2001-09-17 06:35 PM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i liked this poem!!! i really did .. keep it up so i have somemore to read!!!

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*
*If you ever need anyone to talk to feel free to l

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

4 posted 2001-09-17 09:09 PM

Very Cute sis!
so who is this mystery guy?
Justins cuz?

"Its a great day tobe alive, I know the suns still shinin when I close my eyes!"
Travis Tritt

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2001-09-18 04:43 PM

Justin's cuz is a mystery guy, but not this one. Justin's cuz AJ might be going to a concert with me, tho.

And the mystery guy's name is: UNKNOWN. I haven't gotten the guts to ask him yet. I gave him a nickname though, and that's Creamy Goodness.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-10-02 11:02 AM

hmmm Allysa, you're falling for someone else now?
You Go Girl

"It's not a "manly" voice,
an intimidating, hollow nothing,
it's a sweet whisper amongst a crowd"

These lines are wonderful
great lines
thanks for sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-10-02 02:06 PM

ahh lol how alike we r...i liked a guy last year for a really really long time...i didnt find him attractive even...just intruiging...i ended up getting to know him and finding out he wasnt as glorious and mysterious as i thought but we still talk

Thats my lil story for ya lol..i've been there and i kno what its like to see a perfect stranger and have them put butterfly's in your stomach..kinda exciting aint it?

NathanS
Member

since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

8 posted 2001-10-02 07:07 PM

Very nice poem

Great write, hope to see more from you soon *grinz*

-Nathan

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

9 posted 2001-10-02 09:58 PM

Hey guys LOVE it when a girl hits on them. Go for it. And Good Luck.

Ex Animo,
Aaron

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

10 posted 2001-10-03 12:08 PM

Awww, heheh, very nice Poem, I enjoyed it a lot.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

11 posted 2001-10-14 11:04 PM

WHAT!?!?! Not about Justin?!?! Goodness...I HAVE been gone awhile...lol... I need to catch up...hehe
Nice write, Deary...Glad to hear you've found someone new.

Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth...

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

12 posted 2001-10-15 06:33 PM

Okay, his name would be...... unknown still.

I met him at the skating rink, and he is the AWESOMEST rollerskater ever known. OMG>> He dances like you would never believe it.. He came up to me, or I came up to him, or something, and we grinded for approx. 10 seconds, but still.....

Argh...

Oh, and Justin's a pain.

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