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Still do today |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
This is our first time and I want it to be As perfect as perfect can be. A romantic dinner at a fine restaurant To a walk on the beach. I love you, I love you so How much I think you know. Oh how much I think you know. You showed me the meaning of the word French kiss Got all speechless after that kiss. We where slow dancing as close as close could get When my lips touched your lips. The best feeling that I’ve felt I could feel my heart melt. I could just feel my heart melt. I just remember thinking am I dreaming As you walked in couldn’t believe it You where more beautiful than Cinderella It knocked me of my feet. You just took my breath away And you still do today. Oh yes you still do today. You still do to-day. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this made me smile SO big.  I love this, how romantic. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Gorgeous!  This is so beautiful. It's a really lovely write. Be proud of this one. Take care and keep sharing. ~AF~ "Who needs enemies, |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Heh-heh! Yeah...this one's definetly a keeper! Then it comes to be that soothing light at the end of your tunnel... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a cute poem! I think you should give it to this person!! Good job hun keep em comin |
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