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silvrduck
Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

0 posted 2001-09-16 10:42 PM

here's one I wrote quite a long time ago.. but I still feel the same about it, and the person it was written for

hope you enjoy it
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I've said it before
without thinking ahead
of the breaths and admiration
the false hopes I would embed

it taught me a lesson
in listening a little more
to the whispers of my heart
to see between love and adore

I cried that night
and woke again with pain
also with a solid promise
I would never say those words the same

so friend, tonight
when you confess how you feel
know every word is from my heart
every vow I speak is real

trust in my voice
that what I say now is true
no matter what becomes of us
I’ll never regret “I Love You”

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2001-09-16 11:14 PM

Aww.. that was sweet. You wrote that for someone special, I can tell! It was very good, in my oppinion anyway! Did you ever give this to the person you wrote about?

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-09-16 11:18 PM

"no matter what becomes of us
I’ll never regret “I Love You”"

You sparked some thoughts in my head...Awesome write!

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-09-17 03:56 AM

Good piece, ducky. Some heartfelt thoughts in here. Thanks for the read and keep writing.

~AF~

"Who needs enemies,
When you've got friends like these
Caught between me and myself again"
Motor Ace - Enemies

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-09-17 02:08 PM

Sometimes you act too quickly before thinking it thouroughly through...we all have been guilty of that but its good that u noticed and really took the time to sit down and decide if it was how you truely feel...Good poem hun!

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