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crazymin83
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0 posted 2001-09-16 02:33 PM


Wondering where you are now?
Are you still with Jessica?
I’d like to become friends with you
We don’t know when this world is going to end

You were an awesome friend and boyfriend
Now you won’t talk to me
You taught me about love and sometimes it doesn’t go the right way
Wherever you are please email me call me, IM me cause I miss not talking to you.

Who said an ex boyfriend and ex girlfriend couldn’t talk
It still hurts seeing you love someone else
When you told me you loved Jessica I almost broke down into tears
At the prom it hurt my heart.

I still remember
Your voice
Your smile
Your kindness toward people
Minna
September 16, 2001


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Alyssa
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1 posted 2001-09-16 08:34 PM


very cute!
i love this..i kinda feel the same way about someone.

Do you believe in love at first sight? If not I can walk by again!
----ya...right---

Spice
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since 2001-04-13
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2 posted 2001-09-16 11:13 PM


*Sigh* Ya, you still love him but respect him enough on his feelings for Jessica to just keep iton a friends level...I know exactly how ya feel. Awesome write here, Min.  

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

HopelessRomanticGuy
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3 posted 2001-09-16 11:25 PM


Awsome poem!  I know exactly how that feels, I'm in a situation where I'm trying to keep a friendship after love, but it's hard.  Keep up the good work!

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

anonymousfemale
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4 posted 2001-09-17 04:00 AM


This doesn't sound too good. The situation that is. Hope you'll get through it alright.

Thanks for the piece. I enjoyed reading it.

~AF~

"Who needs enemies,
When you've got friends like these
Caught between me and myself again"
Motor Ace - Enemies

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5 posted 2001-09-17 02:07 PM


Just think of it this way...everything happens for a reason and if you are meant to have any kinda relationship w/this person ever again it will happen in its time and place  

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