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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-09-16 08:16 AM

I'been trying to,
but it's so hard to,
keep away from you.

Think only of you,
feeling oh so blue,
if only you knew.

See your face late every night,
you are a constant picture
in the corner of my mind.
I just wish that you where mine,
you're the beautiful painting
that I created inside.

Each time I see you,
I don't have a clue,
about what to do.

My heart is speechless,
I'm getting nervous,
cause you are the best.

See your face late every night,
you are a constant picture
in the corner of my mind.
I just wish that you where mine,
you're the beautiful painting
that I created inside.

Why is this so difficult
if only I knew what to say.
I would already have told
you on the very first day
that i saw you.

See your face late every night,
you are a constant picture
in the corner of my mind.
I just wish that you where mine,
you're the beautiful painting
that I created inside.

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

1 posted 2001-09-16 11:56 AM

Oh how many times have I sat up late in the night and had this wandering through my head. The fact that what is painted in your mind you cannot touch is a very heart felt and sadening concept... /Nick/

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

2 posted 2001-09-16 05:47 PM

Such a beautiful piece...ever thought of making this a song? It would work really nicely.
It hurts to think of these thoughts...you wrote this one so well. It really hit the spot. *sigh*

++ Leah ++

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

3 posted 2001-09-16 08:29 PM

ohhhhh i so know how you feel!
i love this piece!!!

Do you believe in love at first sight? If not I can walk by again!
----ya...right---

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-09-17 03:45 AM

This is so amazing. It's really beautiful and moving at the same time.

"See your face late every night,
you are a constant picture
in the corner of my mind.
I just wish that you where mine,
you're the beautiful painting
that I created inside."

Loving those lines.

Keep writing.

~AF~

"Who needs enemies,
When you've got friends like these
Caught between me and myself again"
Motor Ace - Enemies

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-10-01 09:47 AM

This is such beautiful words
"Paintng I've created inside"
Man, I'm very impressed
*applauds*
keep it up

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-10-01 10:36 AM

This poem was so beautiful! I dont even know what to say

amazing...

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

7 posted 2001-10-01 11:46 AM

I really enjoyed this. It was so beautiful, I echo the others.

Jenn

"You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it."

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