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lil_pwheeler
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0 posted 2001-09-15 09:39 AM


A friend is loyal
To the end and back
They stab you in the front
Not in the back

When you break up
With the one you loved
They hug you and listen
Your friend from above

A true friend
Is once in a lifetime
Talking, seeing movies
They always have time

From riding bikes
To driving cars
From crushes to true loves
You and your friend from above

You can not define a friend
By a poem or a ryme
Cuz' a true friend is
Once in a lifetime

No one dies a virgin, life screws us all

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1 posted 2001-09-15 02:01 PM


yeah, those kind of friends aren't easily found but when you do, hold on   I liked this  
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2 posted 2001-09-15 02:33 PM


you describe true friendship so well...
like it a lot!!

Charisma
~TMP~

TopGunLauren
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3 posted 2001-09-15 02:58 PM


If you have a friend like that you should feel llucky because a lot of people don't.But anyway I loved this poem and keep up the awsome work.
    Lauren

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4 posted 2001-09-15 03:30 PM


"Cuz' a true friend is
Once in a lifetime"

I loved that. Cool poem and very true  

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

CwboyAtHeart
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5 posted 2001-09-15 03:55 PM


I really liked this one!  So true...  You said it very well.  Good job!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

anonymousfemale
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6 posted 2001-09-16 01:08 PM


This is a really nice piece. People like this are rare but when you find them, you feel great for it.

Take care and thanks for sharing.  

~AF~

"Who needs enemies,
When you've got friends like these
Caught between me and myself again"
Motor Ace - Enemies

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7 posted 2001-09-16 09:17 PM


very good!!!!
i like your signature too!
LOL

"Its a great day tobe alive, I know the suns still shinin when I close my eyes!"
Travis Tritt

silvrduck
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8 posted 2001-09-16 11:03 PM


"Once in a lifetime"
that is so, so true

Great poem here  
Sarah


*the chains which have held us are only the chains which we've made*
~jewel

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9 posted 2001-09-30 05:09 PM


I really love your descriptions of a true friend.  
It put a smile in my face.  
thanks for sharing

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10 posted 2001-10-01 11:12 AM


Ahhh i loved this poem it was really good!! Theres on thing i dont agree w/tho..u said true friends dont stab you in the back but instead in the front, i dont think true friends should stab u at all...
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