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A gothic chapter
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A gothic chapter |
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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
I can make you I can break you No tricks, no lies You fall dont expect me to sympethieze Don't betray me Ill burn you The tables Ill turn you Im real No glamour, no glitz I dont wear no Abrecrombie Or fitch More friends Different lunch table As if I care For being a prep my heart just aint there You pass me In the halls Look and whisper what the heck Hey Im a Goth And a proud one at that Black trenchcoats Spiked hair Chokers and beads Hey guess what your labeled, like me I hope you have no problem Cuz I aint gonna change Know what, you and me Just aint the same *No diss to the preps Im fine with you. K? No one dies a virgin, life screws us all [This message has been edited by lil_pwheeler (edited 09-14-2001).] |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
rad poem i like it!! i wish we didn't label people tho. robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ah but without arrogance and stereotyping, where would the world be? It sucks that they treat you this way but don't worry, in most of them, the stupidity doesn't last forever. Nice piece. Thanks for sharing. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
Veyr cool poem. You be you, despite whatever they label you, and kick some major bootay while doing so.  Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
So much anger and hatred in this poem Just don't let others make you feel lesser than they are Never let them do that, ok? Thanks for sharing keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"I can make you I can break you No tricks, no lies You fall dont expect me to sympethieze Don't betray me Ill burn you The tables Ill turn you" LOVED the attitude that was given off in this...It made for a very unique flavor in your write...Thanks for the read- much enjoyed! United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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