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Zengo
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since 2001-05-27

Posts 31
Rogersville, AL

0 posted 2001-09-14 01:45 AM

I was setting in front of my computer and this just
came out so I thought why not!!

The 11th day of the 9th month,
Fear, terror, and horror,
Panic rushes over America,
Conception of incomprehension,
Disbelief and dismay,
Searching for beloved ones,
Droplets fall,
And so does bliss,
Yet throughout it all,
Laden doesn't see,
Ignorance is bliss,
And bliss is patriotism,
With each scar comes unity,
Unity brings about faith,
Which in turn creates,
A passion to live,
Dreams fractured,
However unbroken,
Stronger we grow,
The battle of adversity,
Why fight?,
Laden, you can't win.........

© Copyright 2001 Nicholas Wright - All Rights Reserved

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
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1 posted 2001-09-14 03:39 AM

If they haven't caught him yet, he sort of already has. Don't say he can't win until they actually catch him.

Nice piece. Not many people have written about Laden. Good to see something else.

~AF~

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2 posted 2001-09-14 06:13 AM

great poem i hope they catch the creep!
robin

Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in

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3 posted 2001-09-14 07:54 AM

This poem was so strong!! Beautiful...

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13

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where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

4 posted 2001-09-14 10:35 AM

Well, if we do catch him, I hope that he'll get a taste of AMERICAN JUSTICE!

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~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-09-16 03:16 AM

Excellent write.

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

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