A Ray of Hope (for those who are and have been affected by the NY/Pentagon tragedies)

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A Ray of Hope (for those who are and have been affected by the NY/Pentagon tragedies)

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13

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where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

0 posted 2001-09-13 12:34 PM

It may be behind the rain now,
or behind a cloud,
but the sun is always there somehow,
through the mist and the rain,
through the tears and the pain,
and the frigid air.
It'll always be there.

Sunshine'll scatter the dark,
sunshine'll bring the light,
sunshine'll destroy the night.
It may be behind a shadow,
but it'll always shine.

From inside.

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-09-13 05:21 PM

Most Definitely!

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

2 posted 2001-09-13 07:01 PM

how cute and thoughtful!

Do you believe in love at first sight? If not I can walk by again!
----ya...right---

mistic
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since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

3 posted 2001-09-13 10:53 PM

Very True!!!!!

Life is an open book with many unwritten pages, write something that's meaningful to you there.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

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California

4 posted 2001-09-13 10:56 PM

Very beautiful poem I loved it.
Lauren

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

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Limbo

5 posted 2001-09-14 03:19 AM

I had to smile when I saw that Sunshine had replied. It seemed really appropriate.

This is a beautiful piece. Full of honesty and things will eventually settle.
Very nice. Keep writing and posting.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-09-14 07:56 AM

What a positive outlook! I think we needed this here in pip w/all the talk of tragedy and pessimism...Great work!!

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

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Resting in my cardboard box.

7 posted 2001-09-16 03:13 AM

Thanks for the uplifting spin on things. It was much needed and appreciated.

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

8 posted 2001-09-17 06:29 PM

Sorry it took me a while to reply to this but I don't have Internet at home...
well I thought that the poem was appropriate because a lot of people were being sad and stuff, but there is always hope. And you can always cling to hope.

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

[This message has been edited by FoxXena (edited 09-17-2001).]

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