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The Blackness |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I know I wasn't going to post for a while, but right now I feel the need to write. (Don't expect too much tho  )You must be insane to believe I can exist without all that I've been living for. Having waited my whole life, for a love like yours; for my shallow heart to feel this whole world I've been deprived of. You question us now, After all we've been through? Pushing me away... And how can you, still believe I'll be alright all alone...? Barely breathing, And trapped in blackness. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I've been in a similar situation and it really makes you question your relationship a lot...I hope things work out the best for you...::hugs:: |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I've also been in the same situation and it sucks but I hope everything gets better for you.I loved your poem and keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
*hugs* Grrrr!...GRRRRRR!!! *crush kill destroy* It's a sad piece Jenn but considering the circumstances, it would be. I do like your ending though. It sums up nicely how you are feeling without over doing it. Nice work and keep smiling. You know we all love you!  ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem kepp up the good work! robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you guys for your replies and comments. Sometimes life just doesn't go the way we plan for it to go.  It's ok Lizzy, calm thyself I know you love me!  Jenn "In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart." |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Another great piece of work from you Jenn< I really enjoyed reading it and hope things are ok Zu "You would say anything, you would try anything, to escape your meaningless, your insignifcance" -Muse "Escape" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Now what's going on Jenn?  Who did this t you? grrrrrrrr *hugs* be strong hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
So ya, I was gonna highlight a favorite part...but too many. So then I was like "Hey! I'll highlight and paste the lines that relate most to me..." Again, too many. So obviously, yes I can relate bunches to what you are feeling...I know it's horrible. Hope all gets better, you did an incredible job here deary, and I'm really glad you decided to post...Hope to see more actually. United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
LOL@Acire Thanks everyone for the comments, as always much appreciated. I get inspiration every now and again Jesa... so if I get it again, I'll be sure to post. Jenn "In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart." |
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