Breething deeply, walking backwards

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lil_pwheeler
Junior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 39
here

0 posted 2001-09-13 05:59 AM

Theres life between my tears
Cuz' I've been sitting here for years
I gave here all my love,
But I guess that wasn't enough

She took my heart and ripped it out
Her lifeless fingers moved about
And I was torn to pieces
Without a second glance

You give her all a girl deserves
Doing anything, sometimes losing your nerve
You really want her to be happy
So why cant you stop loving her

You're friends tell you you were too good for her
That your unconditional love, she didnt deserve
Hey bud, its time too move on
Anyone, where has my life gone?

She hugs you, then walks away
What is this game she plays
Does she not care, does she think its cute
It seems everyones been put on mute

[This message has been edited by lil_pwheeler (edited 09-13-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-13 09:23 AM

wow, that is not cool. You should be cold fish and make her think......it does sound like she isn't worthy.

I felt this, good job

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-09-13 10:05 AM

That is horrible hun! Im so sorry!! Some people...gosh i'd smack her around for you a lil if i could and knock some sense into her! I hope that you start feeling better...your better off w/out her even though that might be hard to see right now...::hugs::

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-09-14 02:38 AM

Not a good situation at all. Mind you, this is the way of some people. The world would be a dull place if we all did the same things. All the same, it sucks for you.

Take care and keep strong.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-09-16 02:54 AM

"You're friends tell you you were too good for her
That your unconditional love, she didnt deserve
Hey bud, its time too move on
Anyone, where has my life gone?"

- Don't ya just want to smacc your friends when they say this stuff? I know I do.

"She hugs you, then walks away
What is this game she plays
Does she not care, does she think its cute
It seems everyones been put on mute"

-PERFECT last line, oh I lovedit. I know exactly what ya mean!

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

5 posted 2001-09-16 03:22 AM

good poem i liked it. keep up the good work.
robin

bye lizzy,javi,acire,cherish,SEA,vicky,laura, and anyone else i forgot i will be back to torment you soon muhahahahahahaha

Alysia182
Junior Member

since 2001-06-22

Posts 19
CT

6 posted 2001-09-16 06:30 PM

Breathing deeply
Walking backwards
Finding strength to call and ask her
Roller Coaster, favorite ride
Let me kiss you one last time

Blink...you like them? I LOVE THEM!!! But anyways. Awesome poem. I know how it feels.

Some day, you will ache like I ache! ~Hole

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

7 posted 2001-09-16 08:27 PM

alysia, you confused me with yer post...
anways!
very cute poem! i loved it..and im sorry you feel this way!

Do you believe in love at first sight? If not I can walk by again!
----ya...right---

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