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Poet Unknown
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-09-12 03:33 PM


Born into wealth
Into good health
Came from the gutter
No I didn't stutter
Sittin on the street eatin pringles
Watch fools waistin their time
Dedicate themselves to a life of crime
I've had my share of run ins with the cops
Listenin around the block as the gun pops
Police run and scatter
Someones life begins to shatter
Red dot on your chest
Hope you grabbed your vest
Wrapped in black hands covered in gloves
Duck from the red light beam
Now that you believe in the unseen

To the haters and *******s around the way
Come up off my sack step to the plate
For all the punks thinkin we play
Yeah I got heart what the hell you tryin to say
Preps who think they know our way of life
It's my life this is our life live your life
For all my homies in the grave
Your memory we'll always save

Lookin at my mother with tears in her eyes
Gashes all over my arm worried if I'm gonna die
Fightin over some dumb s*** tryin to get some s***
Raised by my brother
Didn't have much love for my parents growin up
Pushin life too far rollin over some dudes car
This empty feelin crawling in my skin
Livin a life of sin fear is how they fall

To the haters and *******s around the way
Come up off my sack step to the plate
For all the punks thinkin we play
Yeah I got heart what the hell you tryin to say
Preps who think they know our way of life
It's my life this is our life live your life
For all my homies in the grave
Your memory we'll always save
To the haters and *******s around the way
Come up off my sack step to the plate
For all the punks thinkin we play
Yeah I got heart what the hell you tryin to say
Preps who think they know our way of life
It's my life this is our life live your life
For all my homies in the grave
Your memory we'll always save


JUST LET US LIVE OUR LIFE
this is my song writting attempt cherish told me to write one

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

© Copyright 2001 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
1 posted 2001-09-12 03:37 PM


It read like a tupac song. Reminds me of hit 'em up a bit.
Totally on the spot and uncut which is good....however, if you don't want it pulled, remove the swear words and it'll be peachy.

Nice attempt. You'll have to post some more for us.  

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

Poet Unknown
Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140
Missouri
2 posted 2001-09-12 03:46 PM


theyre starred out, if they wanna take it off oh well
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