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Hallucination
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0 posted 2001-09-12 06:26 AM


If only Heaven could cry
( 2x )

You may be lost,
But never forgotten.
Always in our hearts,
Through  taking so sudden.

A nation in grief
Heartaches out across seas
And God bless their souls
May they rest in peace.
Each and everyone.

If only Heaven could cry
( 4x )

you will live on,
in our me-mo-ries.
Even know your gone,
Your love will still breathe.

A nation in grief
Heartaches out across seas
And God bless their souls
May they rest in peace.
Each and everyone.

If only Heaven could cry
( 4x )

Praying for those who died
For those who sacrificed their lives
Praying for the family’s
Who have lost their love ones.

You may be lost,
But never forgotten.
Always in our hearts,
Through  taking so sudden.

If only Heaven could cry
( 4x )

A nation in grief
Heartaches out across seas
And God bless their souls
May they rest in peace.
Each and everyone.

If only Heaven could cry
( till fade )


© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
Acies
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1 posted 2001-09-12 01:02 PM


This is a beautiful dedication Hallucination.
It's nice to see so many people care about the tragic events that happened.
let's all pray for the souls of the departed
And let's all pray for the families of the victims

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma

anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2001-09-12 03:14 PM


I read this before and couldn't find the right words to reply to it with. You've written about this tragic event in the most beautiful of words and this is one of the few pieces that actually moved me close to tears. It's so sad what you nearly lose and what you do in the end.

Ditto to acire.

~AF~

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3 posted 2001-09-12 03:20 PM


thank you for sharing....
my heart bleed along the words,
my tears within

Charisma

keoni
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4 posted 2001-09-12 03:26 PM


Really beautiful poem. I don't know what else to say. Great dedication.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Delirious_Smurf
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5 posted 2001-09-12 04:54 PM


I agree...it was a wonderful dedication.
Very beautiful indeed.
...Don't know what else to say except that despite all the chaotic events that have taken place it's nice to see how it has truly touched us.

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

FoxXena
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6 posted 2001-09-12 07:02 PM


*sniffle* Very powerful, emotional poem. This really expresses the sorrow that all the nation is feeling now, and my heart goes out to all of the families affected by this insane act.

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

cherish
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7 posted 2001-09-12 08:24 PM


really beautiful Brian, very heartfelt and warm. thanks for sharing  

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HeAvEnS AnGeL
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8 posted 2001-09-13 12:22 PM


I liked this ver much
I lost my auntie who was in the first world trade tower that got attacked
I will remember this day forever, and im sure everyone else will to

Let the souls of the innocent who died September 11/2001 rest in peace


Whatever tomorrow brings I'll be there, with open arms, and open eyes ~Incubus~

Spice
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9 posted 2001-09-16 03:37 AM


Such a beautiful dedication....

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

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