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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
From all the way across the world I feel my peoples pain A place that used to be paradise Is now a flood of rain Little children murdered right before there parents eyes, and if people would see our side for once It would be a big surprise YA, we bruise with rocks because they kill with rockets and guns We've been fighting for so long and still haven't seen the sun Is there no justice in the world I'm sick of sympathizing with them wut happend over 50 years ago is happening again We need to know wut is happening now and forget whats in the past Because now we can do something and they'll be peace at last I dont think that can ever be due to some peoples pride Its the holocaust all over again except their on the other side I am deeply hurt and sorry for wut happend earlier today in newyork, I think it is the most unfortunate and stupid act of violence that can ever happen, my heart and prayers go out to everyone |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it is a dark day indeed...... |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Keep in mind it's 2 in the morning...So don't laugh at me when I ask my question. hahaha MKAY. So is this poem about the fighting in the Middle East taking place between Jews and Muslims? Cause thats pretty much how I interpreted it. If I'm wrong, I'll come back and explain my reasoning on it...To tired to rightnow. HaHaHa...ANYWHO! I loved the write, either way. Very awesome! United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Things will look up eventually. Nothing lasts forever.....unless you're grass. Grass is doing a pretty good job of staying around..... Ok off the track..back on now. This is a good and I like the little bits of rhyme you throw in now and then. Thanks for sharing.  ~AF~ "Who needs enemies, |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
im askin the same thing as spice... but its a great poem! "Its a great day tobe alive, I know the suns still shinin when I close my eyes!" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Who are your people? Bel |
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