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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419


0 posted 2001-09-11 10:50 AM


Everlasting nightmares keep haunting me
Putting painful untouchable memories
The place where it hurts the most.

Feels like I’m suffocating in my words
Can’t take it any more I must be cursed
Cuz’ I can’t find love anywhere.

What I wouldn’t do
What I wouldn’t give
To find love, to
Find that special someone
So that my life would be
Complete,
What I wouldn’t give.

Seems like forever without love tonight
Playing solitaire trying to ease my mind
Bit it’s hard when you’ve got no one.

What I wouldn’t do
What I wouldn’t give
To find love, to
Find that special someone
So that my life would be
Complete,
What I wouldn’t give.

If only dreams where real
If only wishes would come true
Than I wouldn’t feel the way I feel
I wouldn’t break down and cry each night

What I wouldn’t give
What I wouldn’t do
What I wouldn’t give
To find love, to
Find that special someone
So that my life would be
Complete,
What I wouldn’t give.


© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
Poet Unknown
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 140
Missouri
1 posted 2001-09-11 02:54 PM


this was good i liked readin it

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13
Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted
2 posted 2001-09-11 05:52 PM


This is a very nice poem. The feeling was expressed very well within the words.  

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

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