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0 posted 2001-09-11 08:09 AM


( MACHINE )
Hi, You have reached Melissa’s.
I’m not in right now, so please
Leave a message after the biip,
And I’ll call you back,
As soon as possible.
BIIP.

Honey I know you’re there so please pick up
Cuz’ there’s so much I need to say to you
Darlin’ want you to know that I never gave up
No, not even when we where torn in two.

Without you I feel miserable,
Without you I don’t know
What the hell I’m livin’ for
Girl I need answers.

For which reasons that I mad you cry
To why that it’s all over
Girl I need answers
To why you left in the middle of the night
Why we couldn’t work it out
Girl I need answers.

Honey I know that we have some problems
But there’s problems in all relationships
If we just stick together I know we can win
But that’s somethin’ we have to work with.

Without you I feel miserable,
Without you I don’t know
What the hell I’m livin’ for.
Girl I need answers.

For which reasons that I mad you cry
To why that it’s all over
Girl I need answers
To why you left in the middle of the night
Why we couldn’t work it out
Girl I need answers.

Afternoons,
Are nothin’ Without you.
( 3x )

Without you I feel miserable,
Without you I don’t know
What the hell I’m living’ for
Girl I need answers.

For which reasons that I mad you cry
To why that it’s all over
Girl I need answers
To why you left in the middle of the night
Why we couldn’t work it out
Girl I need answers.

( Spoken )
Please call me back
I'll be waitin' by the phone
please call me back
I need you so.

Click-

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with you
1 posted 2001-09-11 09:43 PM


I could definately hear this   very well done. You do a great job.  
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2 posted 2001-09-12 01:33 AM


ok how many times has that happened? to many for me. great poem/song.
robin

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3 posted 2001-09-12 05:57 AM


This reminded of an Usher song.  
Very cool. You certainly have a talent for writing songs. Now hurry up with those blasted MP3's!  

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4 posted 2001-09-12 01:41 PM


This was such an awesome format...i loved how u had the answering machine thing in the beginning..that was a cool idea...i feel ur pain hun..believe me i do...i can just imagine how frustrating and painful this is...this was an excellent read and i hope things work out for you.
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