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lilibeelee
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0 posted 09-10-2001 11:45 PM       View Profile for lilibeelee   Email lilibeelee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lilibeelee

A silence within so hidden from eyes
My soul within screams and crys

Inside starving for comfort a peace of mind
It feels like I have left myself behind

Can't controll these feelings inside
wating for when they start to subside

No emotions shown hidden is how it will remain
Struggles and anger of pain

Feelings noone understands noone knows
My feelings are hidden, nothing shows

A darkness over comes me within
Im tired of trying, It hurts deep within

Never happy with these eyes
Inside and out I despise

Never happy with this skin
A darkness over comes me within

Hating myself, Noone knows why
Hating myself, lost tears, I cry

Not caring for me, stoped that long ago
walk alone,and noone would know

Use to alone,numb to the feelings of good
I want things back, like the way they should

Ignored,alone,lonley ill be
Invisable for the eye to see

Existing in a nothing world with noone around
My soul is lost, and needs to be found

Why can't this be normal, snap out of it now
All I can think is, yeah right,how?

Waiting to be pulled out of this sorrow
Hoping that day will be tomorow

I smile on without a flaw without a crack
I want my happiness I lost, I want it back

I continue lieing to myself,nothing is wrong
I continue saying I just dont belong

I try and try but the efort is forseen
All this can me so cruel harsh and mean

I try and try but the outcome is blank
I have fallen out of life, out of rank
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anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 09-11-2001 12:02 AM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

Lisa this is sincere cry...you have poured yourself in this piece...VERY emotional and sad...i can relate to this...



hope ALL gets better, soon...someday you'll see what we all await to see...stay strong.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry-

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2 posted 09-26-2001 01:00 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

This is really very emotional
talking about pouring you heart out
*hugs*
hope things go well

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

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3 posted 09-26-2001 06:51 PM       View Profile for Raven Skye   Email Raven Skye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Raven Skye

"Never happy with this skin
A darkness over comes me within
Hating myself, Noone knows why
Hating myself, lost tears, I cry" - I like this a lot and I'm relating so much to this poem. Good job... If you need to talk I'm here.

*״`.*Raven Skye*״`.*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

anonymousfemale
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4 posted 09-27-2001 10:17 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Wow...what a piece. *hugs* I know how you feel. Remember though that you have the power to make the sun rise the next day and you have the choice to stay the way you are or get help.

Take care of yourself.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

flyaway
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5 posted 03-19-2003 07:46 PM       View Profile for flyaway   Email flyaway   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for flyaway

hey! i like this poem no no wait i love this poem!! i have writen peices like this before i know how you feel and it sucks a lot but don't worry things will get better i promise!! lots and lots of love!! ~Emily~ keep strong and keep smiling! (i know easier said then done but try babe try!!!)
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6 posted 06-04-2003 09:25 AM       View Profile for electricdreamz   Email electricdreamz   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for electricdreamz

hey...excellent. after along time im reading such an emotional poem. every word here has been sculpured than written...
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