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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-09-10 05:32 PM

I've shed so many tears,
wept from so many fears.
A fear of losing you,
maybe even your love too.

My heart was broken,
since that one word was spoken.
First you sighed,
then I cried.

That one word changed my life,
like a stab in the heart with a knife.
Please don't say goodbye,
please don't leave my heart to die.

Don't say it,
don't say goodbye.......please don't....

~death is certain, life is not~
~How can we be friends if everytime I look at you I know thats all we'll ever be~

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

1 posted 2001-09-10 06:13 PM

hmmm sounds like a cry for help, let em know how ya feel (if it has anything to do with that)

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2001-09-10 06:40 PM

ugh...NBH...this sucks..juss member other people like you that won't cheat on ya. You know who I mean mon. Well I hope things look up 4 ya cuz i hate when ur like this. lylas

~Jess

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-09-10 06:47 PM

Your poem is very sad and I hope everything gets better for you.I know how hard it is saying goodbye so I know how you are feeling.Keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-09-10 09:51 PM

awwwwwwww.....*hugs*....this is so depressing!!!..you sounded really despreate in the end...i just hope things work out for you SG in the end.

- I stayed up all night playing poker with tarot cards. I got a full
house and four people died.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-09-11 12:17 PM

VERY sad...such hard times...

"That one word changed my life,
like a stab in the heart with a knife.
Please don't say goodbye,
please don't leave my heart to die."

you expressed yourself fully...and the ending truly sincere.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry-

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-09-15 02:01 AM

*Huggles*
Extremely sad...The ending really really did it...

Hope all is okay...Thanks for the read.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-09-16 12:51 PM

This is such a sad piece!!

That end really made me upset. Hope you're feeling a little better now.
Take care.

~AF~

"Who needs enemies,
When you've got friends like these
Caught between me and myself again"
Motor Ace - Enemies

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

8 posted 2001-09-16 09:22 PM

ohhhh i put this in my library
its so sweet i think im gonna cry

"Its a great day tobe alive, I know the suns still shinin when I close my eyes!"
Travis Tritt

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

9 posted 2001-09-17 06:47 PM

thanks 4 the replies, much appreciated.

Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....

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