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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2001-09-10 09:27 AM


She's in my dreams
she's on my mind,
and every time
I open a beauty magazine
she's on page seventeen.
She's wondering in my heart
24-7-365.

She's takin' a ride
deep inside my mind
Oh what can I do
I can't hold back these
feelings pushin' through
( OH, Oh )
She's takin' a ride...

She's in my heart
she's in my soul,
ready to blow
my mind to another place
she's always in my head.
She's reflectin' in my eyes
3.am. still on my mind.

She's takin' a ride
deep inside my mind
Oh what can I do
I can't hold back these
feelings pushin' through
( OH, Oh )
She's takin' a ride...

She's
the first thing I see,
I the mornin' when I wake up.
She's
so takin' a ride,
in my dreams every single night.

She's takin' a ride
deep inside my mind
Oh what can I do
I can't hold back these
feelings pushin' through
( OH, Oh )
She's takin' a ride...

She's takin' a ride
deep inside my mind
Oh what can I do
I can't hold back these
feelings pushin' through
She's takin' a ride
deep inside my mind
Oh what can I do
I can't hold back these
feelings pushin' through
( OH, Oh )
She's takin' a ride...

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1 posted 2001-09-10 09:59 AM


LOVE this! Great job!!  
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2 posted 2001-09-10 12:23 PM


Oh awesome!! This would sound fantastic to music! You have got to make an MP3 and send it to me. I'd love to hear it.  

Wow..keep up the excellent work.  

~AF~

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3 posted 2001-09-17 12:35 PM


Wow, I'm speachless...except for....this was great! (Sorry for the understatment)
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4 posted 2001-09-17 02:01 PM


This was GREAT!!! Wonderful job hun!
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