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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-09-09 11:48 AM


When I'm around you,
everything else goes away,
and all my thoughts,
are of only you.

When you look at me,
with your pale blue eyes,
I get lost in them,
and you melt my heart.

So much we flirt,
yet so little we love,
and so much I feel for you,
and all this you know.

Yet we don't go out,
nor do we try,
to tell each other,
our true feelings inside.

Try as I might,
I can't get you,
to love just me,
or for you to even like what you see.

~death is certain, life is not~
~How can we be friends if everytime I look at you I know thats all we'll ever be~

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2001-09-09 05:27 PM


ugh..i feel bad 4 ya hun. don't worry hold ur head up high. remember guys are all a lil screwed up in the head   juss think about the good things. remember there is better out there..i've found better and so can you. lylas :-D ~Jess
anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
2 posted 2001-09-10 01:11 AM


If things are meant to be between the two of you, they will happen. You can't fool around with fate because it'll bite you badly if you do. Just try to keep your head up though. There is a lot more to life than wondering why a person doesn't like us.

nice piece. Full of emotion. Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
3 posted 2001-09-10 03:17 AM


ah i know the feeling SG, you really like each other but are too scared to make a move...you both enjoy each othres company but are too scared to take it further....like lizzy said..give it time, things will sort 'emselves out
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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2001-09-10 08:02 AM


The more i read your poems having to do with this person the more i realize what an awful situation your in...i really hope everything turns out alright...::hugs::
Spice
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.
5 posted 2001-09-16 02:36 AM


Blah to the predicament!
Awesome write though.
It's brewing over with emotion and feeling. Loved that.

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

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Twilight Zone
6 posted 2001-09-29 01:17 AM


A lot of people are hurting right now
I hate that so much
Just don't give up, you'll find someone
someone who'll sweep you off your feet
thanks for the read

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

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