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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Watch the clock tick, As time goes by, mistakes become unbelievably horrible, I've done wrong, All I think about is him, Why did I let this happen? I have only made myself look bad, I gave him the wrong feeling, I wish I could take it back, I hope it's not too late, If so I've only lost the best thing that ever happened to me. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Jessica this is a sad piece but at the same time you have to be strong. I heard a quote somewhere today that 'people come into our lives to teach us lessons'. Think of this situation as a teaching. You'll know what not to do next time. You'll get stronger don't worry. Good work. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Very very sad indeed...I'm with Lizzy though, Think of that uplifting quote... Enjoyed the read though...Hope all is well.  You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
aww, poor jess, ur one of my best friends....was this about joe? or about sam? i couldnt tell from this....but u know i'm here when u need 2 talk, we've been thro alot 2gether and i think u should just let things go their own way, destiny's choses it's own fate, sam'll come around...hehe nice poem anyways... much luv,  ~death is certain, life is not~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the poem and hope things get better for you. Well done here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwwwwwwwwwww *hugs*......this is really depressing. i enjoyed the poem heaps jessica. thanks for sharing girly..  "Somehow I managed to single handedly betray myself" Javier Agosto |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
we all make mistakes and you know what we learn from them. i know this from experiance! but ya know what it only gets better! robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I know this feeling...you expressed it very well. I liked this alot and its the first i read from you...i cant wait to read more! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's true, there goes the saying again. Why we always take what we have for granted< I don't know. Hope things do swing your way Good luck, and hoping for your happiness thanks for sharing, keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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