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ANGELBABY
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0 posted 2001-09-06 09:52 PM



If this world were mine I would put a law against rasicim!
If this world were mine there would't be a such word "murder"!
People die for stupid reason's now days and my best friend died because of rasicm!
So if this world were mine there would't be any more hate
There would't be any more people herting people just because of their color of skin!!!
If this world were mine.....

        R.I.P "J"

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HopelessRomanticGuy
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1 posted 2001-09-06 10:51 PM


I'm REALLY sorry about your loss, I know how it hurts.  Though I've never had someone close to me die for that reason, I agree that racisim is a stupid thing, especially when someone dies because of it!  Why do people have to fight for skin color?  I'm so sorry that he died because of that, how could he help the color of his/her skin?  I almost cried at this one, and I haven't done that in a while.  I'm sorry.  This sort of puts my problems in perspective.  I hope your okay, and if you ever need to talk, email me.

                                                                                                                             Rich

Hey, this poem is posted twice, check the other one two.

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

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2 posted 2001-09-07 09:43 AM


racism is something I see a lot of, and it makes my heart sad. I smile the same for everyone. I'm so sorry about your friend. (((HUGS)))  
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3 posted 2001-09-07 09:46 AM


*I closed the other post of this same poem*  
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4 posted 2001-09-07 10:18 AM


I am really sorry as well about your lost....such tragic things happen in the world...its very sad...::hugs::
anonymousfemale
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5 posted 2001-09-07 12:25 PM


Oh man, I'm sorry for your loss. racism is so stupid! There is no need for it. I hope that in writing this piece, you have released some emotions in you.

Take care.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

Spice
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6 posted 2001-09-08 02:25 AM


Racism is ignorance, yes. Sorry to hear about your tragic loss...Your feelings shined through here.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

ANGELBABY
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7 posted 2001-09-08 10:48 AM


Thank you all for being so kind I still don't belive he is gone!!! Thank you all once again for being so sweet!!!!!!

                R.I.P "J"

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8 posted 2001-09-08 03:45 PM


yea...how cruel this world is...you have said this VERY well...even though the fact makes me sad...great job, though.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry-

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