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ANGELBABY
Junior Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 25


0 posted 2001-09-06 09:52 PM


If this world were mine I would put a law against rasicim!
If this world were mine there would't be a such word "murder"!
People die for stupid reason's now days and my best friend died because of rasicm!
So if this world were mine there would't be any more hate
There would't be any more people herting people just because of their color of skin!!!
If this world were mine.....

R.I.P "J"

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Delirious_Smurf
Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.
1 posted 2001-09-06 09:58 PM



I'm sorry for your loss, hope yer doing ok tho.
Very real poem..  

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
2 posted 2001-09-06 10:50 PM


I'm REALLY sorry about your loss, I know how it hurts.  Though I've never had someone close to me die for that reason, I agree that racisim is a stupid thing, especially when someone dies because of it!  Why do people have to fight for skin color?  I'm so sorry that he died because of that, how could he help the color of his/her skin?  I almost cried at this one, and I haven't done that in a while.  I'm sorry.  This sort of puts my problems in perspective.  I hope your okay, and if you ever need to talk, email me.

                                                                                                                             Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
3 posted 2001-09-06 11:58 PM


There wouldn't be any more people hurting people just because of their color of skin!!!

racism sux ...and it sux that things like this still goes on in the world today. ignorance and racism go hand in hand and need to be abolished for good- id love to live in your world Angel.

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