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Smlie4u87
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since 2001-04-28
Posts 16


0 posted 2001-09-05 07:13 PM


Hey Everyone,
     I worte this about my best friend, She moved away and I really miss her. And hradest I had to do was say Goodbye. But i didn't really get to. So, i worte this poem about her. Please tell me what you thing the poem is saying. Thankz A lot!!

The Power Of Goodbye
I never knew the power of goodbye
Was so powerful Intel
I had to say goodbye to my best friend
When I had to say it, I just started to cry
Because I never wanted to be away
from the sister I never had befor
The friendship we have is sill so stonger
The friendship I could always count on
I always knew that you would never let me fall
But who is going to be there
When you’re gone?
Who will left me up?
You always have done so
But even though you are not going to be here
I just want you to know that
You're my sister, you’re my best friend
In the whole world, and
I will still love you
No mater how far, who, or what.
It will never charge.
I will always love you.


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HopelessRomanticGuy
Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
1 posted 2001-09-05 07:28 PM


Very heartfelt poem!  It struck a nerve, reminding me of my own situation, and thesituation I am anwillingly putting my best friends through.  I am leaving for Florida on the 12th, for good this time.  It is tearing my best friend and I up more than we like to admit.  I really know how it feel, and how it probably felf for ur friend too.  Good Work!  I hope to see more soon!


                                  Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

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