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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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I said the words without thinking Not foreseeing their effect Upon realizing what I said I panicked Filled with instantaneous regret I didn't understand your reasoning Why one choice is so much graver than the other Why to fast merits little worrying But to get rid of the food is so very horrible I tried to sort it out It doesn't register in my twisted little mind I listen as you plead And struggle not to lose control I can't promise Nor can I answer questions that I ask myself So I left you hanging as I do now I listened to Ja Rule on the way home With some fat free, sugar free ice cream Swallowed as bits of glass slid down my throat And turned to sand. Craig, I don't understand. |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
well i mean, alot of people dont eat, maybe you eat less than i think, but right now, u eat less than me, but uve been doin it for like a year and u arent dead yet so i dont worry bout it as much, but when u wanna throw up, its just i get so worried, cuz i know people that dont eat but once a day, and their fine, and so are you, but from what ive seen, ive seen movies and stuff, and its just, from what ive seen belimic is harder to survive "as below so above and beyond i imagine |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Eating disorders, whether it be being bulemic or anorexic...BOTH will kill you int he end. A friend of mine died a couple years ago from it. Very sad. It weakens your heart to do this to yourself, And even after she had triumphed over her disease and gotten help and so on...She has a heart attack and seisure and died in her sleep a year later. Ya, you get skinny, but the long term effects it has on you...VERY BAD and RISKY stuff. It's just not worth it at all. AWESOME poem. I absolutely loved it...Ecspecially the ending. You did absolutely spectacular on this write (As you do all your other pieces.) "I listen as you plead And struggle not to lose control" I'm assuming this is Craig? He's trying to help you. listen to him. Hope to see much more posts from you soon. I love reading your work. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You really need to seek professional help if this is being a huge problem, and if it came down to it being even bigger, i would urge your boyfriend to tell the proper individuals to care for u  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
listened to Ja Rule on the way home With some fat free, sugar free ice cream Swallowed as bits of glass slid down my throat it irks me what the others said about this. i really dont know what to say that would help your situation in anyway. i liked the imagery within this poem a lot which to me was sumthing i could go without commenting about. i hope that whatever it is that youre going through will come to pass quickly. i enjoyed this poem muchly. ............Daffodils |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Bel, you always write these pieces that provoke quite a bit of thought. In the end, you will do what you want to do and no amount of pleading will let you do otherwise. You did write with emotion which is always good to see but my views on eating disorders won't be discussed here. Thanks for the read.  ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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