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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-09-03 05:10 PM


I was going thru my old posts, and found this...It was written a lil over a year ago, about someone I didn't think I'd ever see again. Well, I guess I thought wrong, cause we've been going out for 2 months now. I was suprised when I saw this, and just had to repost it.  


~*~ Flowers ~N~ Hearts ~*~
I keep finding myself,
Drawing flowers and hearts.

I look into the mirror,
To find myself smilin' back.

I close my eyes,
And see his face.

I can't eat, I can't sleep,
I just think about him.

I guess I'm being shy,
Cause he stil doesn't know.

I drew his name,
With hearts around.

I'm totally confused,
I don't know what to do.

I have no clue,
My heart is in charge.

Does anyone know,
If we're meant to be?

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

© Copyright 2001 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
fozzyozzy
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1 posted 2001-09-03 11:01 PM


short and sweet.  It must've been a big surprise to find this poem again.  I enjoyed it.

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

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2 posted 2001-09-04 02:16 AM


I enjoyed this one Tamma. Very nicely written.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
3 posted 2001-09-04 02:34 AM


awwwwwwwwww thats so cute tamma. i enjoyed this one heaps. im glad you're happy..

............Daffodils
........Daffodils .....
....Daffodils..........
Daffodils .............

Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2001-09-04 09:13 AM


Awwww,  I really liked this!!!  
Great work, and I'm glad you're happy. Hold onto it.

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

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