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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-09-03 05:08 PM

Ok you guys this is a kinda weird poem but is the frist one i wrote for Antony (my hubby) and he loved it so i hope you do too!!

Do I really love you?
   Look into my eyes.
The shine you see
   is the light
of my soul.

Notice my smile.
   How spontaneous and true!
My face glows in your presence
   my lips caress your name.

Can you not hear
   the hum of my body
responding to your nearness?
   My heart keeps time.

Touch me....I tremble
   Hold me...I sigh
Kiss me...I melt
   Ask me....

.......I love you!

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-09-03 06:15 PM

Oh! LOVED the last Stanza! Wow! That was like my BIG TIME favorite part of the whole poem!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-09-04 02:20 AM

Oh wow, this was just too sweet hehe. I really loved this one. Very real to me

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-09-04 02:29 AM

Notice my smile.
       How spontaneous and true!
       My face glows in your presence
        my lips caress your name.

ooooooooooooooh i like this LOTS!

...i LOVE your smile..its what i call an "open" smile where you smile with your WHOLE face and your eyes twinkle and it makes anyone looking at your photo smile right backatcha! this is a cute one A. thanks for sharing!

............Daffodils
........Daffodils .....
....Daffodils..........
Daffodils .............

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-09-05 09:30 AM

Yep, I've got to agree, it is very sweet. Love like this makes me sick personally but it's good to see you found someone you love that much.
I hope your happiness lasts forever.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

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