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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-09-03 01:58 AM

This one I started writing while I was sitting on the beach. Not sure where the idea came from or anything, but I kind of like it. Let me know what you think.

I REALIZE

I realize what I do wrong
Often covers what is right
Sometimes I'm not a good example
I'm not the person I should be

I realize what I stand for
Isn't always clear to all
Sometimes I like to stay hidden
I'm never the center of attention

I realize the world's size
I don't always feel important
Sometmes I feel like I try to hard
Some don't even notice my existance

I realize I'm worth a lot
My life ha possibility
Sometimes you have to keep your faith
And you will mean a lot to someone

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

1 posted 2001-09-03 08:27 PM

CODY you mean alot to me!!!!!! i promise you you that ... hehe i liked thisone tho .. keep it up

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HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2001-09-03 10:29 PM

Good poem! You are right, we all have our faults, but if you have faith in yourself, then u can see that others do too.

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-09-04 09:19 AM

Awwww..!! You mean a lot to people, and everyone is important. But this world does seem big sometimes, so big that it swallows you and all your problems and they seem so tiny. I liked this.

Keep writing for us.

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-09-04 01:49 PM

Well done here Cody. The poem wasn't as strong as some of your others, but still a poem well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-09-05 12:30 PM

                              I realize the world's size
                               I don't always feel important
                               Sometmes I feel like I try to hard
                               Some don't even notice my existance

i can imagine how you felt sitting there on the egde of the country thinking about how vast and large the world and universe really is and feel in comparison, really small.
i liked this one from you a lot cody - your poems always have a nice message within them and this one was good too- i have faith in me

i hope you have faith in you!

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