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Teen Poetry #5

Take Me To a Place

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-09-03 01:47 AM

This is one I wrote about a month ago... Just started thinking and writing and this is what came of it. That's all the explanation I have. Let me know what ya think!

TAKE ME TO A PLACE

Take me to a place
Where I can be me
Where all of life's scars
Love is able to erase

Take me to a place
Where all are free
Where we all run together
In the human race

Take me to a place
Where health is all good
Where there's no longer pain
No reason for a cast or brace

Take me to a place
Where we're free to love
Where God's love shines
And everybody sees his face

Take me to a place
Where streets are of Gold
Where I'll spend eternity
And Jesus' arms will embrace

      - Cody -

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-09-12 01:04 PM

Cody, all you need to do is look deep nto your heart, and you'll be in such a place.

thanks for sharing

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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-09-12 03:19 PM

hmm...well if you find that place, good for you.

Nice piece.

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keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

3 posted 2001-09-12 03:27 PM

Let me know when you find it so you can draw me a map. Good job on the poem
Jon

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