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SunShine913
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0 posted 2001-09-02 09:35 PM



every moment is spent in dreams
   now, for me, life only means
that since you were in my arms
   I have dwelt among the stars
shadows fly across the night
   cast away by the loving sight
of you smiling in the light
   on the day
you went away

in my dreams,
   now,
to my chest, my quilt I clutch
   in my sleep, I want so much
to hold you again
   with no clear end
no tomorrow, no good-byes
   no more lonely, aching sighs
only a hope
   to find a place
where I belong
   in the heart of your love song

sing until we watch the dawn
   side by side
in sweet dreams
   because the only part of life that's real
is the way you make me feel
   that only part (my heart)
longs to kiss you still (and will)
   on the day i leave to be with you


                    !~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

© Copyright 2001 Andrea L. Figueroa - All Rights Reserved
HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
1 posted 2001-09-02 09:53 PM


Awwww.... you seem to be lonely, but hopeful still!  I know all about that.  I know you will see him, and things will be good, as the poem's end implies.  HeHe!  It'll all be good.

                   Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Spice
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.
2 posted 2001-09-02 10:59 PM


"because the only part of life that's real
is the way you make me feel"
*Smiles* I loved that part...It made me feel warm and cozy and in such a familiar mood setting.
Awesome write here. You'll be together soon and all will be perfectly devine! Thanks for the read!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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