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Teen Poetry #5

4ever

Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

0 posted 2001-09-02 09:52 AM

4ever was in my heart
4ever was in my mind
4ever left the day
That we said goodbye
But when I said 4ever
I held that very true
When I said 4ever
I meant 4ever with you
So don/t let this be the end
Lets make a brand new start
4ever will always remain
Deep within my heart.

~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-09-02 11:11 AM

The flow and rhyme scheme and all made this a charming write. I liked it....Wish you would have typed out the word forever though.Hope all is well with you, I know breakups can be hard...I wish you the best. Thanks for the read- I enjoyed it.