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Ina
Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-09-01 08:21 PM


"I'll go with you" or "time to say good bye"...you all probaly know the song...its amazing..sung by Andrea Bocelli. or the version with sarah brightman.
CONTE TE PARTIRO


It's time that we part
my hope departed for me
All that is left is
the knowledge that we
might never have a good
relationship
My heart has shattered
I can hear it, just like a
window breaking
Where is the love that felt
so strong?
I can't doing anything to
bring us close
I want to watch your face
while it smiles or it frown
Tonight would be nice
not four years from now
A human being with feelings
can only handle so much
and i'm only human!
What am I thinking...
I'll go with you
I'll go where are hearts desire
places unknown
I was wrong my heart does not break
it only hurts with the love that
threatens to break open
My words cannot express all that I
have within me for then it wouldn't
be my feelings
just words
So its time we get started again
back  at the beginning
to experience first words
first experiences
to do things differently
Its time
I'll go with you
forever....

Regina

© Copyright 2001 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2001-09-03 10:04 PM


Well done on the poem Regi! I truly did enjoy it!  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

keoni
Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC
2 posted 2001-09-05 01:30 PM


Very nice Ina,This was a change of pace. I  liked it alot.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

anonymousfemale
Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
3 posted 2001-09-07 02:30 PM


This is a lot lighter than your other pieces. It had a really smooth flow to it and it didn't have the weight of a heavy depression attatched to it.
Andrea Bocelli is an AMAZING man. Oh! He sings fabulously. If you ever get the chance to see him in concert, see him.  

Thanks for sharing and keep writing.  

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

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