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fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-08-31 11:36 PM


The Moments

When she is there i need not rhyme
or draw the pretty pictures
to entertain the
                  moment
Her thought is to
change the world
   with a drift?
          drop
          drink of the
                  moment
  She can carry her head
with pride because
   it's golden for the
                  moment
    the cardboard box she
keeps
   my words
      poetry
      confessions in
is to remind Her
  of ever single solitary perfectly beautiful

                                    moment
            

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

© Copyright 2001 Sean Michael DeFlora - All Rights Reserved
TopGunLauren
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
1 posted 2001-09-01 03:45 AM


Sweet poem I loved it keep up the awsome work!
  Lauren

pharon
Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
2 posted 2001-09-10 09:08 PM


i love the way you write!  you've got an increadible lucky girl...i'm glad you have someone like that...anyway..good poem!

           me

cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
3 posted 2001-09-10 09:44 PM


Very nice i must say sean. brought a smile to my face.thanks for sharing

- I stayed up all night playing poker with tarot cards. I got a full
    house and four people died.

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