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0 posted 2001-08-31 05:58 AM


Come back to me
Your all I need.
Without you it doesn’t feel right.

Girl how I wish,
That you where only a kiss, away
So that we could be close, baby together.
Miss you so bad,
You’re the best I’ve ever had, and I
Don’t want to lose you no, baby forever.

I can’t eat or sleep
When your not by my side
And when I close my eyes
You are all that I see.
Every single day
I just lay in my bed
Can’t get you outer my head
You’re face won’t go away

Come back to me
Your all I need.
Without you it doesn’t feel right.
( 2x )

I pray each night,
That you will change your mind, and come
Back home where you belong, baby together.
Each night I dream,
That you are here with me, and that
You will never let go, baby forever.

I can’t eat or sleep
When your not by my side
And when I close my eyes
You are all that I see.
Every single day
I just lay in my bed
Can’t get you outer my head
You’re face won’t go away

Come back to me
Your all I need.
Without you it doesn’t feel right.
( 2x )

When you are not here
It’s tearing me apart
It’s breaking my heart
When ever you’re not near
I always used to smile
Whenever I woke up
But now I don’t have your love
You’re always on my mind.

Come back to me
Your all I need.
Without you it doesn’t feel right.
( 2x )

Come back baby
Come back ( come back )
Come back baby
Come back to me
( 3x )

I can’t eat or sleep
When your not by my side
And when I close my eyes
You are all that I see.
Every single day
I just lay in my bed
Can’t get you outer my head
You’re face won’t go away

Come back baby
Come back ( come back )
Come back baby
Come back to me
( 3x )

Come back to me
Your all I need.
Without you it doesn’t feel right.
( Until fade )


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Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2001-08-31 08:41 AM


This was really sad, and filled with emotion. A few spelling/gramatical errors kept throwing me off in my reading though. Other than that, nice job.

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
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2 posted 2001-09-01 03:47 AM


Your poem is really sad and filled with emotion.But anyway I loved it and keep up the awsome work!
  Lauren

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