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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Putting on this perfect face no flaws are present not a trace Inside is ripping taring apart Inside remains an empty heart Inside holds pain anger and sadness Inside holds insanity and madness Outside you see perfect face If only pepople didnt judge, I wish that was the case Outside shows no pain shows no fear Inside holds each one of my painfull tears tired of being watched like a hawk Iam not so perfect what a shock I starve my soul and me I Cry on the inside but you cant see You look on the outside and say its so great You now want to help, but its all to late You say your thoughts about what you see You say your thoughts, and you dont know me Just stop this stop it all now I dont know how I make it, I dont know how Inside hurts so bad Inside makes me so sad Inside is anger and mad Outside is flawess to your eye Do you know how many nights I come home and cry I dont know why you judge I dont know why I dont see what you see all I can see is stupidity I canot find the real me I go on with my head down I continue to smile even though Iam hurting I go on with the same frown You look and judge and laugh and stare My heart is torn my soul is bare Day to day a constint reminder, nothing is there |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I can truely relate to your poem because I hide all my emotions inside and pretend like everything is fine.SO all my friends think I have such a great and happy life but on the inside I'm dying.But anyway your poem is really good and I can't wait to read more of your poems. Lauren |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Wow, Lisa...This piece is just FILLED with pain...Hope all is okay. You impressed me much with this write...It's just so raw. I love it. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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