Blood is Thicker Than Water

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Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-08-30 10:29 PM

Your nerves rattling loudly,
My body sleeping soundly.
Why are you laughing as if you are my friend?
I'm going to slap you again and again.
I'm a figment of your imagination,
A simple exageration.
Blood drips from the corner of your eye,
Why you lookin so high?
Maybe its a little dizzyness,
Or the simplicity of your frizzyness.
Standing on the edge,
Take a leap across the ledge.
Enter the realm of which doesnt exist,
Or do you think you can resist?
This is our fear factor,
Get up off your tractor.
Cross the gallow,
Lurking deep yet in the shallow.
Unseen force plows into you,
And another then what do you do?
Come quickly to a conclusion,
For there's nothing only confusion.
The force you didn't see was me,
The second was my brother who else would it be?
Like a target marked for death in the valley,
Better float back to sea on your galley.
Never contest,
Only be incarnated like the rest.
Blood is thicker than water for sure,
How much do you think you can indure?

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

Delirious_Smurf
Member

since 2001-08-08

Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.

1 posted 2001-08-30 10:34 PM

Lotta emotion in it...kinda scary!

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

2 posted 2001-08-31 12:33 PM

LOOK i read it happy now!! to be honest i loved this one!!! it was awsome .. sad but awsome!!!!

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-08-31 01:32 AM

Hmmm...I like it! I like it! (Call me a man of few words why don't you...) You can also call me a newbie if you want, but I say this is your best so far!

~Alex

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-08-31 01:40 AM

Blood is thicker than water for sure,
How much do you think you can indure?

wow this is really angry stuff kyle! *hugs*...i enjoyed this one lots. thanks for sharing buddy

............Daffodils
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Daffodils .............

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-08-31 08:37 AM

I dunno about the scary bit... I actually found this one kinda of humorous...!Don't ask me, I'm weird... hehe
But it is true there was a lot of emotion to this piece, great work on it.

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 08-31-2001).]

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-09-01 06:39 PM

I must say Kyle, this is one of my favorites of yours so far. I loved it. I thought you did an awesome job with this whole entire piece. Lots of anger...But I think thats how it should be. Blood IS thicker than water.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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