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0 posted 2001-08-30 08:48 PM


what are friends?
friends are people that care and are there for you.
friends are people that will like you for who YOU are.
friends back you up when times are tough.
it's good to have a friend.
for if we didn't have friends where would we be?

-robin


i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

[This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (edited 08-30-2001).]

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cherish
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1 posted 2001-08-30 08:52 PM


ROBIN!!!!!....youve got blue green hair!!.. ..AQUA hair!! thats sooooooooo cool!! this is a cute poem...where on earth would we be if we didnt know how to make friends?...thanks for sharing hun!

............Daffodils
........Daffodils .....
....Daffodils..........
Daffodils .............

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
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2 posted 2001-08-30 09:10 PM


Yes, friends ARE good to have, no one can handle life alone.  The poem was very good, but and is spelled nad in the second line.  Otherwise I liked it alot!

                                    Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Delirious_Smurf
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3 posted 2001-08-30 10:42 PM


Very true...where would we be without friends?
I know I wouldn't want to live without em


Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

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