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SunShine913
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since 2001-08-19
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Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-08-30 08:40 AM



          I only wish


Tears of joy,
and not of pain,
tears i could enjoy.
...I only wish.

Memories of glory,
and not of sadness,
a fairy tale story.
...I only wish.

Feelings of pride,
and not of hate,
for him and his bride.
...I only wish.

Wishes of hope,
and not of dispair,
hidden behind this envelope.
...I only wish...

                    !~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

© Copyright 2001 Andrea L. Figueroa - All Rights Reserved
Poet Unknown
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 140
Missouri
1 posted 2001-08-30 01:18 PM


ok i just learned agood lesson, i cant just wake up and compliment on things so ugh, its a very good piece and keep writtin em

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
2 posted 2001-09-01 03:58 AM


Sad poem but it's full of emotuin and I loved it.Keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

Delirious_Smurf
Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.
3 posted 2001-09-01 01:06 PM


That was a very cool poem, I liked

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

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