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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-08-29 10:27 PM

          Burning Love

My love for you burns hotter than fire,
     Will last longer than the air you breathe,
Taste sweeter than any dessert,
     And fill your dreams while you sleep.

It will wrap you in it's arms like the breeze,
     Blind you like the everlasting sun,
Cost more than anyone could afford,
     And excite your every desire.

My love will leave a smile on your face,
     Imagination in your mind,
Happiness in your heart,
      And comfort... even in your darkest hour

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

1 posted 2001-08-29 10:52 PM

This is quite the uplifting piece.  Good job.  I especially liked

"It will wrap you in it's arms like the breeze,
     Blind you like the everlasting sun,
Cost more than anyone could afford,
     And excite your every desire."

Loving the imagery. Great post.

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2001-08-29 11:00 PM

Hey!! This isen't bad at all!!! You should not have worried. I agree with fozzyozzy, it is a very uplifting peice! You need to have more faith in your work too, Andrea.

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-09-03 02:03 AM

This was such a beautiful poem. It's awesome! You should show this to your hubby

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

4 posted 2001-09-03 04:58 PM

Wow I loved the feeling in this post. You captured the very essence of love. It is both overwhelming and overpowering. If it's with the right person it feels like the world is no longer there. What great imagery. I'm glad I got to read it.
Chez

If we're told we're bad, that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe if we are surrounded by beauty someday we will become what we see.

Jezziekaka
Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 58
where the trees touch the sky

5 posted 2001-09-05 07:28 PM

I can't wait for love like this......sadly at 11, I have a long wait LOL Mom says!

be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise!

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