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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-08-29 08:05 PM

Im back for awhile
trying to make it in
this world
its gotten so hard
been dealing with crap
thats shovled in my face
I need a break
a long break
I can't stand anyone anymore
nothing is what it seems
never forget that
I'm tired of this
I'm tired of people
I'm sick of it all
This is last season final
Its the end of happiness
The project of my happiness
is finished
completed and graded
F-
The head aches are burning
Im a storm near its finished
An emotional breakdown
waiting to erupt
I'm trying to heal , fast.
I'm fine
everything is alright....

NOTE:this poem is not what it seems to be.....

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

1 posted 2001-08-29 08:14 PM

hmmm wow....if its not how it seems then im not sure what to make of it....its a good piece nontheless

Eternal agony, invisions of carnage, needles stabbing you in the eye, this is what its like when doves cry

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-08-29 08:42 PM

wooooooooooah...you know i can relate to this regi...but prolly not in the way you would want me too. i thought that this one was pretty good. thanks for the read.

Daffodils
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anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-08-30 09:00 AM

When is anything what it seems to be? I'm taking this piece to a really philosophical level for me. The emotional side of it is really quite strong but the power behind it is somewhat weak and not up to your usual standards. Ugh I can't think of what to say to this. It's good, I did enjoy it but there was something missing in it that is there in all your other pieces. Thanks for sharing this all the same.

~AF~

I'm a little teapot, short and stout! Here is my handle, here is my spout. *toot toot*

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

4 posted 2001-08-30 12:17 PM

I agree with AF. This poem was good, but I didnt't enjoy nearly as much as I usually do. Good poem nonetheless.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-09-06 06:28 PM

*hugs Ina forever*

Hope things are better

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

6 posted 2001-09-06 09:22 PM

I'm thinking and I think I understand.
All things pass
Bel

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