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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2001-08-29 07:44 PM


I'm not your little girl anymore,
I know what's good and bad,
Please treat me like the young woman I am,
Not the little girl you think you still see,
I'm pissed and about to break,
Consider how I feel too,
You don't trust me or seem to care,
I wanna runaway from this hell,
And live in the peace everyone else seems to have,
It doesn't matter anymore.

© Copyright 2001 Jessica Dodson - All Rights Reserved
Love's Addiction
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 57
all around you
1 posted 2001-08-29 07:48 PM


EXACTLY JESS!!!!omg, we get no respect these days and its annoying..neways, nice job loved it

Life is a waste of time, time is a waste of life, so be wasted all the time and have the time of ur life!!!
Don't EVER judge me - Slipknot

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
2 posted 2001-08-29 07:50 PM


yes, i can totally agree with this one, great job...

~death is certain, life is not~
~How can we be friends if everytime I look at you I know thats all we'll ever be~

Poet Unknown
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 140
Missouri
3 posted 2001-08-29 07:50 PM


well that bout sums it all up i guess =o) good job

Eternal agony, invisions of carnage, needles stabbing you in the eye, this is what its like when doves cry

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2001-08-29 08:17 PM


Welcome! and let me just say, that peace you think others have, is just in your mind, the grass really isn't greener   I have been where you are, honestly, I know how you feel.   It gets better, faster than you think.   Please check your email for a special greeting   ~SEA
cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
5 posted 2001-08-29 08:32 PM


first off:

WELCOME JESSICA!!

I'm pissed and about to break,

wooo!! i liked this first post!! i thought it was short but very forceful. good job on this one jessica!!im looking forward to more poems by you! i hope you enjoy posting and reading while you're here  

Daffodils
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punkrockerrobin
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Sparks, NV
6 posted 2001-08-30 01:08 AM


welcome to passions! great poem! i wish people would see me as a 19yr old and not a 12 year old. people think i'm not old enough to make my own decisions! well i am so they better listen!
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

SunShine913
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Italy but from NC
7 posted 2001-08-30 01:50 AM


Welcome Jessica!!!


we are glad to have you join the crazy world of us!!

I really liked this one and i will be looking foward to seeing more of you work!!
                  

                    !~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

Spice
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.
8 posted 2001-08-30 06:47 PM


I'm behind...But I thought I'd take time out of my schedule to specifically reply to your poem.

   WELCOME TO PIP!  

My,  What a beautiful name you have...Jessica. It's just so, so...So perfect.   (Gee, can you guess? My name is Jessica too! hehehe)

ANYWAY! I enjoyed the poem bunches. Your emotions/feelings come shining through. Sounds like your going through some rough stuff. Actually, when I saw the title...That song came in my head. You know- "I'm a big big girl in a big big world..." HaHa...I loved that song...
ANYWAY. (Again.) Hope things get better for you. Parents have a hard time adjusting to the teenager/mini adult type thing I guess. I know how ya feel to an extent. Hope things get better for ya. Perhaps have a talk with them? Running away though, not a good option.
Hope to see more writing from you soon! Replies too! Goota have some replies. Oh, And come join us in Teen Chat...You'll love it.
Thanks for the read!   Buh bye!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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