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Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2001-08-29 06:44 PM

Dont tell me what I already know,
as you stand there anticipating
what I may or may not believe,
about a dream,
or a lie,
or a foolish mistake.

Don't tell me what I already know,
gathering information and accumilating
my deepest wish,
or my darkest secret,
or a worthy promise.

Don't tell me what I already know,
as you sit there listening,
for a key to my tales,
about my work,
or my love
or my life.

Tell me something that I want to hear,
like a quote,
or a fact,
or a phrase,
feed my imagination,
with something I've never heard.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2001-08-29 08:04 PM

Wow, I like this one too, in fact, there's not much here at passions I haven't liked, but your work is always great. thx for the read.

Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

2 posted 2001-08-29 08:23 PM

way to go kim..*applauds* this one was really kickin

Eternal agony, invisions of carnage, needles stabbing you in the eye, this is what its like when doves cry

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-08-29 08:28 PM

oooooooooooooh this is really good! its just the thing i need to tell a few annoying ppl about conversing with me when im feeling a bit down!..i liked this one a lot thanks kim! i thought that this was a nice change of poetry content- i enjoyed it lots!

Daffodils
            Daffodils
                        Daffodils
                                   Daffodils

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

4 posted 2001-08-30 03:45 AM

Very good!
Loved the end... it's true that you need something out of the ordinary to feed an imagination... Great post,

ALLIE

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-08-31 12:09 PM

Well done here. I liked how you wrote this one. I connected with it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-09-01 03:43 PM

OOooo Awesome! I feel you toatlly on this one.
Thats it! Grr! I'm a fan! haha

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

7 posted 2002-03-05 05:36 AM

Thankyou all for your feedback, I haven't been on the site for a while but I appreciate all the posts which I have gathered over the past few months and I will do my best to keep posting!

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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