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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-08-29 04:15 PM


when a guys says he loves you,
do you know he means it?
can you see the truth in his eyes.

when a guy says he loves you,
is he there every waking moment?
is he there to comfort you when you're hurt.

when a guys says he loves you,
does he spend more time with you than his friends?
does he take to that resturant you've been wanting to go to?

when a guys says he loves you,
he should tell you he means it.
you can see the truth is his eyes when he says it.

when a guy says he loves you,
hes with you 24/7.
hes always there to comfort you from the pain.

when a guys says he loves you,
you are his anything and everything.
there is no this and that.

robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-08-29 04:22 PM


Robin~
hey, I like your hair girl!! I always wanted to do that. Never had the guts to go beyond blonde  
I liked your poem  

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2 posted 2001-08-29 04:54 PM


Robin,

i loved your poem. altho i do no my guy loves me!! He married me!! hehe .. very good very good...O and i love your hair to im with sea tho i dont have the nevers to do it

:exorcist:!~Andrea~!:exorcist:

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fullest*
*what is love?*

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3 posted 2001-08-29 05:31 PM


I believe than no one should say it at all just for the hell of it.  Say it when you really and totally mean it.  Thanks for sharing.  keep it up

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4 posted 2001-08-30 12:47 PM


i agree with you acire! "i love you" should be said with meaning. tks for the compliments bout my hair. it's gonna be hot pink soon.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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