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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2001-08-28 11:03 AM


Saw this girl at the mall yesterday
Laughing with her friends in the all way
Never seen a girl so fine
If I could I’d try but I can’t deny
The way she make me feel

Oh falling,
I’m falling in love
I think I must be dreaming
Still I love this feeling.
Oh falling,
I’m falling in love
And I can not get enough
I’m falling, I’m falling in love

Keep passing her by time after time
She’s a constant picture on my mind
She reached out and stole my heart
If I could I’d try but I can ’t deny
The way she make me feel

Oh falling,
I’m falling in love
I think I must be dreaming
Still I love this feeling.
Oh falling,
I’m falling in love
And I can not get enough
I’m falling, I’m falling in love

She’s so beautiful
So, so irresistible
When I close my eyes
I still see her smile
If I could I’d try but I can ’t deny
The way she make me feel

Oh falling,
I’m falling in love
I think I must be dreaming
Still I love this feeling.
Oh falling,
I’m falling in love
And I can not get enough
I’m falling, I’m falling in love


© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2001-08-28 02:32 PM


Aww good for you! Ain't love grand?   Good luck to you.

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

SunShine913
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2 posted 2001-08-28 03:19 PM


GOOD LUCK TO YOU!

:exorcist:!~Andrea~!:exorcist:

*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
3 posted 2001-08-28 09:37 PM


Ahhh.  Love is such a wonderful feeling.  Not to long ago I remember being in love.....but it wasn't returned......but I guess you are all tired of hearing me mope.  

Well anyway, I LOVED this poem, it was really good!  Hope to see more love-inspired poems in the future.  This one is going in my library.

                                    Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

allie
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since 2001-07-09
Posts 218
Australia
4 posted 2001-08-29 03:30 AM


OHHH!! my favourite quote "There's nothing like romance"

You made a wonderful write out of this, Beautifuly expressed!

JUST PEACHY

ALLIE

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5 posted 2001-08-29 01:38 PM


Sounds like yer on cloud 9. That's something to cherish. Good luck with it all.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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