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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-08-27 09:23 PM

wisp of silence
drifting aimlessly away
awaken by sudden change
of breathless serenade
hauntingly lacking closure
taste of longing
forever denied
evaded from selflessness
a flicker of loss
feed by my unshed tears
familar love, gone

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

1 posted 2001-08-27 09:28 PM

this is a really good poem i enjoyed readin it :O)

Only darkness falls on those without souls

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-08-27 09:28 PM

oh my goodnes Tiffy girl, this rips at the heart. WOW! this is perfect poetry my dear. (((HUGS))) to you

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-08-27 10:47 PM

wow look everybody! its tiffers!

"hauntingly lacking closure"...
this is really very sad...i thought you did very well with this the imagery was "haunting" to say the least. i hope you're ok...

..well done here..thanks for sharing!

Piece you life together and you WILL find holes.

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

4 posted 2001-08-28 08:07 AM

Love this line: hauntingly lacking closure

Great write!!

ALLIE

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

5 posted 2001-08-28 08:23 AM

oh my stars tiffers this was an awesome poem! i hope you are doing ok cus you never answer me on msn.

robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-08-28 01:36 PM

This wa so good! I really did like this...but it's so sad. Hope yer ok.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

7 posted 2001-09-01 02:33 PM

Cherish stole my fav line...

hehe
This is very sad indeed. Done so wonderfully though. Your sorrow is just in full view. Hope all is well. Do you need me to ride up there and visit you, Tiff? HeHe- I'll do it! Just to make you smile! hehe

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

8 posted 2001-09-05 10:05 AM

aww Tiffer....awwww.....*hugs* awesome poem, and I'll talk to you later hun

much luv to you.
~Carly

Speak softly and carry a beagle.

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught."
~Edouard Manet

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

9 posted 2001-09-05 01:54 PM

Awww I really liked this.

It was short and sweet and those are really my favorite for my lazy brain to read. Great write.

Jenn

"...and this is how you remind me, of what I really am..."

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

10 posted 2001-09-05 06:50 PM

wow... can i ever relate to this now... great work... it hit very close to home
*Pixie*

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

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