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Raven Skye
Member

since 2001-03-03

Posts 112
.In a House.

0 posted 2001-08-27 03:58 PM

I risked my life today
playing in the rain.
See band camp ain't easy,
leaves you in lots of pain.

Today was the easy practice
BOY I don't want to see tomorrow
Cuz if this practice was easy
I'd don't know what's going to follow.

It was sunny and hot
and I almost died.
Then the dark clouds rolled in
and the sky cried and cried.

It rained and it poured
yet we still marched along!
And the band kept going
playing that tired old song.

Today was the easy practice
BOY I don't want to see tomorrow
Cuz if this practice was easy
I don't know how much more of this I could swallow.

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

1 posted 2001-08-27 04:23 PM

Love the title....did ya see Amer. Pie 2 Anywho, this was really interesting...gives me the feeling there's more going on inside then you're really saying. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it

"Make your life like toiletpaper - long and useful."
"When 2+2 is 5 or less, it's time to question common sense."

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

2 posted 2001-08-27 05:45 PM

*Looks behind her to check that no Apple Pies are stalking her* This was pretty cute... sounds like being at bandcamp is more work than fun tho hehehhe

~ali~

Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel.

Delirious_Smurf
Member

since 2001-08-08

Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.

3 posted 2001-08-27 06:28 PM

Must say the title fooled me!
I automatically thought it would be goofing American Pie but it seems to be more than that...I liked it

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

4 posted 2001-08-27 09:05 PM

Lol!! So I've heard...

Bel

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

5 posted 2001-08-27 09:30 PM

that was good, kinda goofy makin band camp sound like boot camp but it was creative and very good :O)

Only darkness falls on those without souls

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-08-27 10:40 PM

wooooooooooooooOOooooooooo!! i loved this piece....you did very well in this one..its cute!
*waves at your pic* HIYA!!

Piece you life together and you WILL find holes.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-08-28 01:37 PM

I thought this was ok. Not your best, but nonetheless a good poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

8 posted 2001-08-29 07:58 AM

Lol...this is very true. I've got a bunch of friends in band, and all they do is gripe about band practice....rain or sleet or snow or hail, they're always marching. I really liked this poem.

-Kosetsu

Of all the things that I confess,
Here's one that is doubtless
I will love you always Jess
Never think I could love you less

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

9 posted 2001-08-29 09:49 AM

Cool poem. Definately makes band practice sound terrible.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

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