I'll go along when time allows To lay alone inside my mind Silver mirrors,opiate sounds Reflect the warmth that hides inside Close the shades let no one see they tore my soul. but I'm still me And not for long in fright I'll stay, I'll sing along as babies pray The thought of thoughts the taste of gin I'll rise above. (edited my admin) eating grin I'll lay alone inside my head to shun their glares and block the stares And when time alows I'll live no more with the shattered dreams and lonely thoughts.
It's not that good really but it's heartfelt!
Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.
[This message has been edited by Heavens Tears (edited 08-28-2001).]
It's about bloody time! I've been WAITING for another post from you, Laura! hehehe "Close the shades let no one see they tore my soul. but I'm still me" Loved those lines. Hell, Loved the whole write. *Pops you* No good? *Unpops you* Oh I see...Fishing for compliments? I taught you so well. LOL. Seriously though Laura, very heartfelt indeed. Very awesome. I loved it. More, MORE!
You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.
Laura, this poem was awesome, but I the whole poem is based upon a ryhme scheme and then it's broken in the end. I mean the ending did rock but the flow kind of cuts off due to that break and it confused me for a bit. I really did enjoy this poem. Good job!
I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.
Laura! Remind me to go and look at your other posts a little later on. This is really good. I liked the way you delved deep into the aspects of you that is making you unhappy. You've got some great lines in here. I can't wait to see more from you.
"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"