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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
I sit and look out at this wonderous view I sit here and stare looking out at these beautiful green trees remembering my entire life twenty years have passed it seems like 31 each day I can recall I feel the sensual wind passing around my skin hearing the birds around and above it seems they understand feeling the earth beneath my feet I have the most respect for it is holding me on this world the world I such adore shivers run down my spine as the cold breese passes through my shirt I remember my first ever Love so foolish I was, arn't we all I made so many silly mistakes in Her mind I am evil but I am truely good for I find it so hard to express my true feelings around Her I say and do the wrong things I so realise now why did I say such stupid things my mouth should've stayed shut but still I live on, remembering these moments and everything in-between I can picture her beauty as though She is here I can touch your precious face I remember our laughs, our cheerful smiles and our feelings of pure Love I sit and think of my whole life I cry because of hate questions and comments which I have made shouldn't have been said for the questions really needed no answer I should've focused on Love thing I have done, so silly things some of these, had a simple reason at the time I couldn't ignore I felt Her tender touch She touched my heart and soul as soon as I felt Her pure Love I simply didn't want to go for I thought as soon as I left She would stop thinking of me I thought She would find another and touch their soul then I would be forgotten our great times would be ignored and they would make no foolish mistakes no poet am I, I am simply trying to express my inner self I sit and remember my entire life not a moment passes me by because of Love, I seem to smile because of happyness and pure freedom I Loved and felt Loved so my life is simply finished I could die, from this moment on it wouldn't make a difference for I would die for Love I would die for her pure Love I have lived my life to the fullest risks I undertook laughed I so have smiled from ear to ear seen the snow so white Loved a perfect dove hated an evil beast sweat I so endured tasted a so sweet jade honoured I have laws I have broken smelled a tender rose blood I have weeped tears have flowed sadness passed me by lonely I am now an the wind I so hear peace is thy life and my life is good I can say to my pure heart the only one who listens I remember my twenty years and I speak aloud my life is complete |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I dont know if your life can be complete so early, but if yours is, congrats, and whats your secret? I did enjoy this poem though. It was very expressive. Great job! |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow...I really loved this. What a beautifully written piece! If only we all could live the kind of lives where we could say, "If I died right now I'd die happy because I've lived every moment to the fullest." You are truly lucky, truly talented, and definitely wise beyond your young age. Amazing work. ~Kay~ "Make your life like toiletpaper - long and useful." |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is really beautiful and I loved it keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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